Thank you so much for submitting your game to the jam! I loved the music in yours, and the take on the fledgling story - focusing on the first year and surviving through it was a great idea!
The atmosphere is beautiful and I enjoyed the introspective perspective. The newly turned fledgling is a rather common subject, but you managed to give it quite an original and intriguing twist. The story left me hungry for more!
My only suggestion would be checking the text for typos and adding punctuation: I believe it would make the experience even more immersive.
Hey, thanks for give my game a play and covering it on your channel. I'm glad you were able to get through the sea of typos and tortured prose.
I feel bad you hit a game breaking bug just before making the final choice. I have fixed the problem now. Based on your playthrough you'd should seen 3 choices to decide which of the 8 ending you would have received.
Leave as quickly as you arrived
Burn the place down
Have Madam Rose use her connections to have all traces of what happened remain hidden
I hope you enjoyed the experience, and good luck and fun playing all the other games in the game jam.
No putting your writing down, alright? The main character is a very well written person and the game overall is good. I am glad that you caught the game breaking bug, as fixed games are always better than broken ones and thank you for making the game :)
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Thank you so much for submitting your game to the jam! I loved the music in yours, and the take on the fledgling story - focusing on the first year and surviving through it was a great idea!
The atmosphere is beautiful and I enjoyed the introspective perspective. The newly turned fledgling is a rather common subject, but you managed to give it quite an original and intriguing twist. The story left me hungry for more!
My only suggestion would be checking the text for typos and adding punctuation: I believe it would make the experience even more immersive.
Hey thank for giving it a play, glad you found the character intriguing and enjoyed the story.
Ya, there are a lot of typo. Every time I review the script I seem to find new ones I missed the last time.
Pros:
- you are the first person that I've found incorporating scrolling and movement to the background.
- the game is gorgeous and music fitting.
- the main protagonist is a mature well written soul.
- text speed is pleasant.
Cons:
- I broke it and my game froze, so I did not get to an end, I don't know why.
Hey, thanks for give my game a play and covering it on your channel. I'm glad you were able to get through the sea of typos and tortured prose.
I feel bad you hit a game breaking bug just before making the final choice. I have fixed the problem now. Based on your playthrough you'd should seen 3 choices to decide which of the 8 ending you would have received.
I hope you enjoyed the experience, and good luck and fun playing all the other games in the game jam.
No putting your writing down, alright? The main character is a very well written person and the game overall is good. I am glad that you caught the game breaking bug, as fixed games are always better than broken ones and thank you for making the game :)